Horsepower – 100 Word challenge for Grown Ups

His eyes bore into mine as he walked past, his every muscle taut with strength and power. I heard him snort to attract my attention.

He wanted me, badly.

His stare didn’t waver as he showed off his perfect body, his maleness ready. My desire was making me giddy.

I turned my back slightly, flirting with my tail, flicking it to send off my strong scent in his direction. It worked, he could barely contain himself.

He came over and nudged me softly with his nose, he would produce perfect foals. We pressed up against each other and our mating began.This is my entry for Julia’s 100 Word Challenge which this week is prompted by her gorgeous photo above. I quote “it was taken at the Eden Project in Cornwall, SW England and is one of a few really amazing sculptures using recycled items.”

I hope you enjoyed it and I invite any feedback/criticism you may have – thanks!

14 Comments

  1. Alison T
    March 6, 2012 / 7:05 PM

    Beautiful sculpture and perfect words. 

    • Mari
      Author
      March 9, 2012 / 3:37 PM

      Thank you, I love the sculpture, so very clever to be able to do that

  2. jfb57
    March 6, 2012 / 9:05 PM

    Wonderful! So sensual!!

    • Mari
      Author
      March 9, 2012 / 3:37 PM

      Thanks Julia, the magnificent sculpture inspired me :)

  3. March 7, 2012 / 11:53 AM

    I love the way you have taken a sculpted horse, turned it into a real one, and then given it human emotions. Brilliant!

    • Mari
      Author
      March 9, 2012 / 3:37 PM

      Thanks Sally Jayne, I fell in love with the horse, he’s such a fine specimen

  4. Lisa
    March 8, 2012 / 3:05 PM

    Woo, I think I need a cold shower now. Powerful.

    • Mari
      Author
      March 9, 2012 / 3:38 PM

      It’s quite difficult to get the right balance when talking desire I think, I hope it wasn’t offensive

    • Mari
      Author
      March 9, 2012 / 3:40 PM

      Thank you, I was inspired by the horse who I think is beautiful

    • Mari
      Author
      March 9, 2012 / 3:41 PM

      I’m glad you see it too, I thought if I was a horse, I’d want to be his mate he’s such a fine specimen

  5. March 9, 2012 / 5:25 PM

    What an excellent take. Very interesting and an unusual take. Brilliant. x

    • Mari
      Author
      March 11, 2012 / 9:02 PM

      Thanks susan, I’m glad you liked it. I’ve often thought that animals have feelings and thought too, it was interesting to be a horse! :)

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